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I think the most important qualification to be a teacher is a ability to get close to students. First, if they have the ability, they are easy to give knowledge for students. Once students get close to teachers, they give no prejudce about what teacher says, and teachers are easy to control students. Also, they can showw them good example of person in society. Nowadays, the ability of getting close to other people is importnat, so students will get a chance to learn it by teachers who have the ability.
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I agree with the following statement that is is importnat to have a friend with different interests from yourself. First, we will be able to understand all kinds of people. By having friends of different kind, we will face to some problems and by learning how to solve them, we will learn how to face to all kinds of people. Also, we will be able to control all kinds of people. By understanding them, we might be able to understand them well, because we know how they will interact with us.
2 comments:
Se-Young,
Q1
This is a very good response. You are a solid three and moving toward the four range. I've made some grammar and word choice changes as seen below:
I think the most important qualification to be a teacher is the ability to get close to students. First, if teachers have this ability, it is easy for them to pass on knowledge to the students. Once students get close to teachers, they feel no prejudice about what the teacher says, and consequently, teachers are better able to control the students. Also, they can show them a good example of a person in society. Nowadays, the ability of getting close to other people is importnat, so students will get a chance to learn this through their teachers who have the ability.
Se-Yeong,
Q2
This was a sharp drop off from your previous response. You delivery sounded labored and a bit awkward and some of your grammar was a bit strange as well while your development got a bit strange at the end, too. You dropped down to the 2/3 range (closer to 2)on this response. My corrections follow:
I agree with the following statement that it is importnat to have a friend with different interests from yourself. First, we will be able to understand all kinds of people if we make differnt kinds of friends. Furthermore, we will be better prepared to face some problems, and by learning how to solve them, we will learn how to face all kinds of people. Also, we will be able to control all kinds of people. By understanding them, we might be able to understand them well, because we know how they will interact with us. <----what does this mean???
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